You saw no way out
A jumbled puzzle in your mind
A pitch-black cavern
An infinite abyss in your heart
You stopped the flow
You stifled the ache
And left one word goodbye
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- Thunderroad79
- I am 36 years old and just trying to find my way. I love poetry, lyrics, movies and photography and am using the blog world as an outlet for my passions. Enjoy and comment freely!
A very great poem! :D
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you commented on my "day off" post, and I hope that you can comment here too:
http://dannysignifyingnothing.blogspot.com/2009/08/turning-off-sound-and-fury.html
A very nice poem. I want to thank you for all of your comments on my blog. http://saraseigfriedphotos.blogspot.com I use a Canon Rebel XTi and I don't use any filters don't own any yet. I use Picasa 3 as my photo software (it was free), I also have GIMP (but still haven't figured out how to use it yet).
ReplyDeleteAnd sorry to bug you, but please look at this:
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Danny,
ReplyDeleteTwice a week I catch up on all the blogs I follow and will post when I read them. Don't feel you have to remind me to check your blog. I will do so and comment accordingly.
Thanks,
Erin
Great poem. I feel a knot in my throat just reading it...so tragic. I love the lines "you stopped the flow, you stifled the ache"
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ReplyDeleteI almost used the word "choked" the ache but it felt too deliberate seeing as what it was referring to...
OK, I'm glad. Can't wait to see your wonderful comments. :)
ReplyDeleteAs soon as I read it I knew what it was for... still can't wrap my head around what inspired it...
ReplyDeleteI'm new to Blogger and surfing the blogs. I immediately related to this poem, or at least related to having someone in my life who felt this way. Thank you for the insight in your writing.
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